tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post5846791180615934960..comments2023-10-24T06:16:28.401-07:00Comments on Trespassers will be Benefitted: That NightPreetihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-59519751268282980342009-05-15T04:02:00.000-07:002009-05-15T04:02:00.000-07:00The beginning was awesome. The atmosphere you crea...The beginning was awesome. The atmosphere you created was creepy enough to get the adrenalin coursing thru the veins, but I kinda felt like you ended it too quickly and too merrily. People are too jaded with creepy stuff nowadys, they've seen all the "hills have eyes" and "Ring" movies. Its difficult to creep them. By the way the beginning felt very much like "sleepy Hollow"( that is a compliment).By the way even I am trying to creep my readers. Do tell me your honest views. Cheers!<br /><br />http://deftlydaft.blogspot.com/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07980647740018204149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-52674091420102399682009-04-28T12:41:00.000-07:002009-04-28T12:41:00.000-07:00i miss yooh, truly.i miss yooh, truly.Running in circles.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07612586426526163771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-37521723444044658132009-04-20T15:40:00.000-07:002009-04-20T15:40:00.000-07:00And what does Cogito, ergo sum mean???And what does Cogito, ergo sum mean???muthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02849537728128467505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-70624068976935767572009-04-20T15:32:00.000-07:002009-04-20T15:32:00.000-07:00Quite an interesting weave.....
You are good at d...Quite an interesting weave.....<br /><br />You are good at describing stuff preeti....<br /><br />do post more....<br /><br />hey and do try out one of my own stories...<br /><br /><br />http://average-everyday.blogspot.com/2009/04/one-dark-winter-night-short-story.htmlmuthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02849537728128467505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-58948556454432245492009-04-20T08:12:00.000-07:002009-04-20T08:12:00.000-07:00first time here..n quite a treat !
a very fine sto...first time here..n quite a treat !<br />a very fine story here..enjoyed reading it so much!<br />u write really well, Preeti (read thru older posts too)...i am now a fan :)vinnyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07002501707107783193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-86423526747218396452009-04-08T23:59:00.000-07:002009-04-08T23:59:00.000-07:0011 now and counting :P11 now and counting :Psanely insanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18445202328587652200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-1442604427933611782009-04-08T23:48:00.000-07:002009-04-08T23:48:00.000-07:00SANE...arrey...i have to read the whole thing yaar...SANE...<BR/><BR/>arrey...<BR/>i have to read the whole thing yaar...<BR/>and it has 10 chapters...<BR/>you know how long that is na..<BR/>so give me some time baba...<BR/><BR/>:-(((Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-79530827387780092632009-04-07T01:37:00.000-07:002009-04-07T01:37:00.000-07:00not saying either...till u pay a kind visit to my ...not saying either...till u pay a kind visit to my blog...hmmmph :Psanely insanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18445202328587652200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-57081267555290353012009-04-07T00:44:00.000-07:002009-04-07T00:44:00.000-07:00ARAYANS...thanks mate...:-))))and do come back her...ARAYANS...<BR/><BR/>thanks mate...<BR/>:-))))<BR/><BR/>and do come back here...<BR/>and dont shut up please...this is your space as much as it is mine...<BR/><BR/>:DDDPreetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-14153566639413679602009-04-07T00:43:00.000-07:002009-04-07T00:43:00.000-07:00STILL...in the end he marries the woman with the l...STILL...<BR/><BR/>in the end he marries the woman with the lazy half smile and smoky eyes...and they live happily ever after...<BR/><BR/>:-))))Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-4811141968770672862009-04-07T00:42:00.000-07:002009-04-07T00:42:00.000-07:00STILL:pthank you...:-))))i dont know why im writin...STILL<BR/><BR/>:p<BR/><BR/>thank you...<BR/>:-))))<BR/><BR/>i dont know why im writing this stuff...it just doesnt seem to stop...<BR/>i guess im possessed by the ghost of some dead writer...<BR/><BR/>:DDDDDPreetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-68617108275588936762009-04-06T22:13:00.000-07:002009-04-06T22:13:00.000-07:00do as Still Thinking says. Please!ps. a little hes...do as Still Thinking says. Please!<BR/><BR/>ps. a little hesitant to comment...tends to happen, when we read stuff that's so good...tend to be a little concious of what we write in the comment...lest it fail to match up-to the classiness above. ;)<BR/><BR/>ps2. the description of the journey to the mansion...too good!<BR/><BR/>ps3. too many <I>ps</I>'s. must shut-up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-3410541739053516432009-04-06T11:20:00.000-07:002009-04-06T11:20:00.000-07:00Read my lips. I'm serious. And now, read my words....Read my lips. I'm serious. And now, read my words.<BR/><BR/>Leave your job and do one of the following immediately:<BR/><BR/>1)Go meet the Ramsay Brothers and sign a deal for yourself.<BR/>2) Go meet a creative director of an advertising agency and let him have this post in a form of a storyboard.<BR/><BR/>There! Either ways, you're gonna definitely make money. Remember, STILL is your friend!<BR/><BR/>Gawd woman! Why are you hell bent on scaring the hell out of me? I'm 'this' genre phobic!<BR/><BR/>What a friggin awesome vivid narration? I'm almost seeing that tree with the open mouth screaming noiselessly *goosebumps* <BR/><BR/>What am I to make of the end? Save me and let me know if he's in limbo as well?Sparklinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16367530230101771408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-65753406567949340902009-04-06T05:58:00.000-07:002009-04-06T05:58:00.000-07:00Vickuuu....thank you...:-)am glad you liked it...a...Vickuuu....<BR/><BR/>thank you...<BR/>:-)<BR/>am glad you liked it...<BR/>and identified with the character too...<BR/>:-)<BR/><BR/>i hope you havent been singled out by a ghost thoughPreetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-22493516343222725662009-04-06T05:57:00.000-07:002009-04-06T05:57:00.000-07:00INSANE...kyaaa....???crazy person...HAHAHAHA...so ...INSANE...<BR/><BR/>kyaaa....???<BR/>crazy person...<BR/>HAHAHAHA...<BR/><BR/>so you planning on dyring and haunting me ha...? :-(<BR/>nahiiiiin...keh do ki ye jhooth hai...<BR/><BR/>PS: you havent said anything about the story yaar...Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-68604963227436010912009-04-06T04:46:00.000-07:002009-04-06T04:46:00.000-07:00wow...i thought i was reading some professional.lo...wow...<BR/>i thought i was reading some professional.<BR/>lovely...<BR/>and i liked it<BR/>the male character is exactly like me.<BR/>thank you :)rainboyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13884782002088989668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3968242645034580108.post-86574982903072297962009-04-06T02:50:00.000-07:002009-04-06T02:50:00.000-07:00u know when she said "will you"i was almost sure s...u know when she said "will you"<BR/><BR/>i was almost sure she was next gonna say "order me a large extra pepperoni cheeseburst pizza"<BR/><BR/>when i die and haunt u...i will make u order so many of these pizzas i tell u<BR/><BR/>laughs his ghostly laugh :Psanely insanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18445202328587652200noreply@blogger.com