Friday, November 28, 2008

Poetralyzing into Obscurity

“We’ve got everything under control”
The system wears these words
And naked bodies lie
Exposing the truth
A missed train, a much awaited dinner
Wrong place wronger time
Well it’s over for now
What next?
Routine, I guess
One more event will be penned down
The Establishment will dance a jig
For all the neutralizing
The effects have made it to the centerpiece
The cause is lying under the carpet
Ignored forever conveniently

16 comments:

Raghu Ram Prasad said...

Finally the war ends...and atleast the Mumbai is safe.....It's really a war like situation

Che said...

the war has just begun

Preeti said...

RAGHU

what makes you think we are safe...?

Preeti said...

CHE

and we cannot let this happen to us again...
we cannot...we should not...no

shnkrnryn said...

there are three p 's which have troubled india population poverty and pakistan its time to end em all

Preeti said...

SHANKY

i think i am beginning to agree with this...

Still thinking said...

I don't know whether the war has begun or no but I know for sure this is not the end :(

Trinaa said...

ignored??? no baby..not this time!!

Shoonyata said...

beautifully written...

the carpet is inside us, and the shores from where they come are that of our collective consciousness...unless the collective change is within, there is no escape.

burf said...

the carpet has to begin hurt sooner or later

Preeti said...

STILL

i think so too...
:-(

lets pray to God that all will be fine...

Preeti said...

TINNI...

i wish the politicians had your fervour and passion!

Preeti said...

SHOON

thank you, mon ami!!!

i believe in a collective consciousness too. but i think the idea of a consciousness has disappeared from our society...hence collective then seems to be at a very superficial level!!!

apologies for sounding so negative...but that seems to be the flavour of these times...

Preeti said...

BURF...

oh.. they will stamp all over it and crush it to a pulp and carry on with their businesses...

Stupidosaur said...

//TINNI...
i wish the politicians had your fervour and passion!

So that adds one more P to Shnkr's list

Politicians

Preeti said...

STU...

yeah it definitely does...i wonder how he missed it in the first place...